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30 April 2012 @ 02:06 am
[fic: white collar] Thin Ice  
Yes, I've produced more cliche hurt/comfort *g*

Title: Thin Ice
Characters/Pairing: Neal, Peter, Diana; Gen
Genre/Rating: Hurt/comfort; PG-13
Word count: 3500
Warnings: None
Notes: Written for a lovely anon on my drabble meme. I'm… not very good at writing drabbles. (And yes, I'm still working my way through the prompts, I promise!) Beta'd by the always-lovely helle_d.

Summary: Hypothermia!fic. A blizzard during an undercover meet is a recipe for disaster.

Peter was trying to ignore his gut-feeling of anxiety.Collapse )

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leesa_perrie: Peter Burkeleesa_perrie on April 30th, 2012 02:11 pm (UTC)
Nicely done! Friendship, action, angst and popsicle Neal - what's not to love?! :)
Frith: White Collar - Neal - hat bluefrith_in_thorns on April 30th, 2012 06:43 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed frozen!Neal :D
shadowfireflame: White Collarshadowfireflame on April 30th, 2012 03:04 pm (UTC)
Just delicious. I love how good Neal is at getting himself into these situations he needs to be rescued from, and this was a serious one indeed! Having Diana there the whole time provided a different and interesting dynamic, too. Very enjoyable, as always.
Frithfrith_in_thorns on April 30th, 2012 06:44 pm (UTC)
Yes, these situations are all Neal's fault, not mine ;D I'm really glad you enjoyed this! I'm having fun writing Diana into my hurt/comfort fics at the moment.

Thank you very much!
kriadydragon: Dolphinkriadydragon on April 30th, 2012 08:26 pm (UTC)
That was wonderful :D I love hypothermic fic, especially intense hypothermic fic like this, where things are scary and hectic and sharing body-heat isn't even a thought, just an action. Excellent comfort at the end as well. I adore it when a near-death experience leaves the characters shaken and in need of much reassurance. So much to love about this fic!
Frith: White Collar - Neal - smile hatfrith_in_thorns on May 1st, 2012 11:59 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much! I really enjoy writing my drama and peril, so I'm very happy that you liked it! And I'm glad that the comfort worked, too :)
littlered2littlered2 on April 30th, 2012 08:39 pm (UTC)
Mmm, hurt/comfort. (I really should watch White Collar so I appreciate it more!)
helle_d: stylehelle_d on May 1st, 2012 02:10 am (UTC)
Yes. Yes, you should. (It is hurty and comforty and has awesome, competant characters! Frith is sitting next to me and telling me to insert 'pretty. I agree.)

(Also, hurt/comfort! Did not know you were into. Yay!)

(Frith says hi. It is May Morning; apologies for the subsequent incoherence.)
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Vanae: WC/Peter - Worriedvanae on April 30th, 2012 08:52 pm (UTC)
Frith: White Collar - Neal - smile shirtfrith_in_thorns on May 2nd, 2012 12:03 am (UTC)
:D :D
florastuart: teamworkflorastuart on April 30th, 2012 11:25 pm (UTC)
Eeeee! This is wonderful. And I especially liked that you included Diana - I love Peter and Diana working together to take care of Neal.
Frithfrith_in_thorns on May 2nd, 2012 12:03 am (UTC)
Thank you very much! I adore Diana, and love her working with combinations of Neal and Peter :D
(Anonymous) on May 2nd, 2012 02:42 am (UTC)
Yes, that's exactly what I wanted! Thank you so much for filling my prompt! *hugs*
Frith: White Collar - Neal - smile hatfrith_in_thorns on May 2nd, 2012 12:36 pm (UTC)
Aww, I'm really glad you liked it! Thank you! :D
Ferryboat GeorgeFerryboat George on May 2nd, 2012 08:58 pm (UTC)
That was totally awesome, hypothermic snuggling in the middle of New York :) I love Peter having to pull him out of the lake, and then both him and Diana keeping him warm until help arrives.
Frithfrith_in_thorns on May 2nd, 2012 09:41 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much! I love these classic tropes :D